Comments on: A very honest poem http://tololy.com/2005/11/27/a-very-honest-poem/ Thu, 08 Jan 2009 17:28:38 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU hourly 1 By: Tololy’s Box » Blog Archive » Behold: Casualties of war http://tololy.com/2005/11/27/a-very-honest-poem/#comment-3322 Tololy’s Box » Blog Archive » Behold: Casualties of war Thu, 24 Aug 2006 08:04:31 +0000 http://tololy.com/?p=117#comment-3322 [...] A very honest poem - November 27th, 2005 [...] [...] A very honest poem - November 27th, 2005 [...]

]]> By: Devil's Mind http://tololy.com/2005/11/27/a-very-honest-poem/#comment-3321 Devil's Mind Tue, 29 Nov 2005 06:24:00 +0000 http://tololy.com/?p=117#comment-3321 [quote]I am with you that one needs to be aware of what's cooking in the world. But I do not feel this should be the religion of everyone.[/quote] u know, there are more conflicts in this world than those being broadcasted on the news... and its obvious tht u are concerned about the conflicts in this world... still we should mind our own buissiness! [quote]I am with you that one needs to be aware of what’s cooking in the world. But I do not feel this should be the religion of everyone.[/quote]

u know, there are more conflicts in this world than those being broadcasted on the news… and its obvious tht u are concerned about the conflicts in this world… still we should mind our own buissiness!

]]> By: Tololy http://tololy.com/2005/11/27/a-very-honest-poem/#comment-3320 Tololy Tue, 29 Nov 2005 02:20:00 +0000 http://tololy.com/?p=117#comment-3320 Nas, Haiku is such a beautiful art form. I have an entry about it, stay tuned. Nas,

Haiku is such a beautiful art form. I have an entry about it, stay tuned.

]]> By: Nas http://tololy.com/2005/11/27/a-very-honest-poem/#comment-3319 Nas Tue, 29 Nov 2005 02:01:00 +0000 http://tololy.com/?p=117#comment-3319 this reminds me of a haiku that goes: <I>"oh! you want me to love you like you would love yourself if you were me"</I> this reminds me of a haiku that goes:

“oh! you want me to love you like you would love yourself if you were me”

]]> By: Tololy http://tololy.com/2005/11/27/a-very-honest-poem/#comment-3318 Tololy Tue, 29 Nov 2005 01:43:00 +0000 http://tololy.com/?p=117#comment-3318 Welcome to Tololy's Box, Vincent. You are positively correct when it comes to how passive the poem feels, it is in fact extremely passive. "War is a nasty business, I don't want in" -That's what the voice in the poem says. I am with you that one needs to be aware of what's cooking in the world. But I do not feel this should be the religion of everyone. Welcome to Tololy’s Box, Vincent. You are positively correct when it comes to how passive the poem feels, it is in fact extremely passive.

“War is a nasty business, I don’t want in” -That’s what the voice in the poem says.

I am with you that one needs to be aware of what’s cooking in the world. But I do not feel this should be the religion of everyone.

]]> By: Vincent http://tololy.com/2005/11/27/a-very-honest-poem/#comment-3317 Vincent Mon, 28 Nov 2005 13:28:00 +0000 http://tololy.com/?p=117#comment-3317 I can't say for sure which war you refer to (although, perhaps, I can hazard a guess...) but I can only say that it is a conflict that we should be paying as much attention to -- indeed engaging with our words and minds -- as much as possible. As with anything unpleasant, it won't go away simply by closing our eyes and going to sleep... I can’t say for sure which war you refer to (although, perhaps, I can hazard a guess…) but I can only say that it is a conflict that we should be paying as much attention to — indeed engaging with our words and minds — as much as possible.

As with anything unpleasant, it won’t go away simply by closing our eyes and going to sleep…

]]> By: Devil's Mind http://tololy.com/2005/11/27/a-very-honest-poem/#comment-3316 Devil's Mind Mon, 28 Nov 2005 04:54:00 +0000 http://tololy.com/?p=117#comment-3316 heh, you didnt get it ;) i'll explain myself: [quote]Wake me up, When the war is over.[/quote] but the war is never over, so actually u r asking: "dont wake me up"... so if you hang a "dont disturb" sign on the door of your dorm, no one will wake u up... the point is: the war is nvr over; i just tried to imply it in a subtle way heh, you didnt get it ;) i’ll explain myself:
[quote]Wake me up, When the war is over.[/quote]
but the war is never over, so actually u r asking: “dont wake me up”…
so if you hang a “dont disturb” sign on the door of your dorm, no one will wake u up…

the point is: the war is nvr over; i just tried to imply it in a subtle way

]]> By: Tololy http://tololy.com/2005/11/27/a-very-honest-poem/#comment-3315 Tololy Mon, 28 Nov 2005 01:38:00 +0000 http://tololy.com/?p=117#comment-3315 But is it, Sabri Hakim? What door is that, Devil's Mind? But is it, Sabri Hakim?

What door is that, Devil’s Mind?

]]> By: Devil's Mind http://tololy.com/2005/11/27/a-very-honest-poem/#comment-3314 Devil's Mind Mon, 28 Nov 2005 00:04:00 +0000 http://tololy.com/?p=117#comment-3314 or better hang a "dont disturb" sign on your door.... or better hang a “dont disturb” sign on your door….

]]> By: Sabri Hakim http://tololy.com/2005/11/27/a-very-honest-poem/#comment-3313 Sabri Hakim Sun, 27 Nov 2005 22:02:00 +0000 http://tololy.com/?p=117#comment-3313 yes, it is. yes, it is.

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